I am excited about my new duet partner. Sometimes people come into your life and you think, “there is a reason for this”. I had this thought as we wrote the duet below. I think we are going to have some fun writing together. I also found out she has published a few books I can’t wait to buy and review. If you would like to help her out with reviews (because self publishing promotion is hard work) then check out this link to her books.
Written by Laura A Lord and HastyWords
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I fear the things I cannot hear
As if they are waiting to pounce
These… things just crouching
Somewhere out there, lingering
Invisible graves being marked
Lucidity being disguised, masquerading
I see them standing there in shadow
The light carves lines of lyrics
Through the air, hanging like
Some heavy, wet wool blanket
I suck in a deep breath
And choke on the emptiness
Ready to perform their cacophony
The vile creatures begin to seethe
They can see me but they are hidden
Behind the veil of humanity, starving
Until their masterpiece starts to play
Orchestrating sadness inside of me
I’ve been feeding them with my soul
My mourning spread out
Like a welcome feast
The music swells as they find their seats
I’m serving myself up
On a silver platter
A bow draws strings across my neck
A broken sacrifice, a bleeding wonder
Betrayal breaks out its scaffolding
As it practices its opening notes
A master at creating disharmony
He begins this ceremonial feast
By rearranging the poetic beats
My heart creates as it palpitates
Rewriting a symphony of blues
Into a classical medieval chant
I’m laid here open wide
Like a gift, presented in shining wrapping
And Dismay has constructed
A dance floor in the empty
Cavity of my psyche
He’s twirling Distress to the
Chaos beat of the thump, thump, thump
The mumble of malfunction
The sweet sweet chorus of dissonance
Rising into raging melodies
As the emptiness inside me grows
And I beg for the mercy
They are salivating heartily for
And I cry the rancid tears
Their tortured souls are thirsty for
What if the only instrument we play is the beating of our heart?
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Writing this with you was the best. I really needed the lift this gave me. You are a talented woman and I’m excited to work more with you in the future. You inspire me to be a better poet. . .something I’ve always needed a bit of help with. Thank you.
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Well done and need help.
From what I read, your poetry comes from your heart and that beats its own beat and we call that poetry. But that is my opinion. keep smiling.
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Ooh this I liked.
I just got inspired. 😀
Thank you Ladies. Keep on smiling.
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This is just so damn brilliant.
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Grabs me and resonates. Well done!
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Reblogged this on georgeforfun.
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Beautifully done. Congrats
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I love your poem.
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Ohhhh but the two of you sure write purty 😀 I like this a LOT 😀
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You never fail to amaze me…
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