I know…this isn’t a duet. It was a duet but I re-wrote it this morning so I could continue to publish on schedule. I hope you enjoy.
Written by Hastywords
Trials fell from the stars
Before my glistening eyes
They landed hard and fast
Before a focus could be set
I sat watching, hopeful
That somehow… somehow
I would find answers
And a bit of peaceful resolve
I took in the fading sunset
As metaphorical flames rose
Incinerating my inner chaos
Recalculating my future path
Crickets chimed the hour
As night swallowed day
And I watched in silence
The vast expanse of night
I allowed all my passion
And all my hidden rage
To tango passionately across
A starlit midnight stage
My heart slowed its pace
My breath soft and slow
Peace began to seep
Into shadows I held deep
And still the breaking of dawn
Colors the visiting night as it
Stretches and yawns
Upon my pupils… lit
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HASTYWORDS 
Ohhhh now this, THIS is my favourite. Pure, unadulterated Sunset, filled with shadows and hope and sparkling, beautiful words. I slightly giggled because I heard ‘recalculating’ in a SatNav voice…but you have NOT lost your way. Not even a TINY bit.
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I totally had the same SatNav voice in my head when I wrote it lol…. I love that!
I am glad you keep me company 🙂
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I do, I DO, and I’ve really enjoyed IMMERSING myself in poetry here this evening. I read them ALL AT ONCE, like pudding. If that makes ANY sense at all.
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YES and now I want pudding 🙂
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ME TOO! I gave up sweet things for lent. ACK
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Reblogged this on georgeforfun.
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I like this one.
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I did enjoy… I am not commenting on every one of these because I remember most of them
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You remember from when? They are all new
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seriously? I swear I remember some of them but not others. My old brain is not in good shape.
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Lol well I think one or two may have blogged on another site before today maybe. Sorry I kind of flooded the sphere today
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I will have to go back tomorrow and try again
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I really love this!!
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I was worried about this one coming together coherently. Removing the pieces that weren’t mine literally changed its meaning completely. It was an interesting challenge 🙂
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Reblogged this on IdealisticRebel's Daily View of Favorites and commented:
Awesome!!!! Hugs, Barbara
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