You’ve slayed me with this one – the call and response works very well in this. The most striking image to me is the dancing demons, malevolent yet playful in their intentions. Also I’ve never thought of fantasy metaphors in a poem like this – another keeper to draw inspiration from.
HASTYWORDS 
At least you have many angels on your side, sometimes the only way to see all ones demons clearly is to meet them face to face.
Be well,
Benjamin
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Did you go to rule, or slay? 😉
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Rule…but I slayed everyone who was mean first.
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You’ve slayed me with this one – the call and response works very well in this. The most striking image to me is the dancing demons, malevolent yet playful in their intentions. Also I’ve never thought of fantasy metaphors in a poem like this – another keeper to draw inspiration from.
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read H.P Love craft, his work will fit right into your nite mare
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Even the giggle causes me to quake!
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love it… but the picture is a little disturbing…
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