This duet took some time to write due to me losing my place a billion times. She was patient though and I think the end result turned out beautifully. Visit SerendipiTee here.
Written by SerendipiTee and HastyWords
Wading through a cold, familiar river
I happened upon a gold and silver beam
The brilliant sparkling pulled me to the sun
And dragged me deeper into the flowing stream
I stared directly with fascination and for the first time
Was not blinded but could see that someone
Had left his mark, a message, a rhyming song
Written in fire upon this fiery globe in front of me
Wading through a fire of lukewarm flames
I happened upon an unexpected inferno
That, engulfing me, soothed me and pulled me to its center
I shielded my eyes -careful little eyes for what you see-
I blinked and caught a holy vision, all-knowing,
Staring at me with eternal wisdom and complete clarity
Absorbing crystal perspectives in a kaleidoscope of colors
I cried out what seemed to be several voices in harmony
Igniting my center, the very core of my fragile being,
Opening my mind, empowering me to understand
The world and everything around me, all that I could see
Every blink of my eye turned a page in the storybook of reality
I could see the future; I was the storyteller coloring every sheet
With a box full of colors some of which I had never seen
I no longer had a name or a face but the sight of a visionary
Borrowing for just a moment the eye of God, I could see infinity
amazing…I cant stop smiling 😀
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That was really lovely!
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beautiful… the title and the color sort of reminded me of doing acid…
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ahhh… I did your book review… go look go look go look…
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This is hauntingly good.
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Reblogged this on SerendipiTee and commented:
This is my first DUET with Hasty Words, What an honor and fun experience! Please check out Hasty Words for some amazing art.
https://hastywords.wordpress.com/2014/02/11/peering-through-gods-kaleidoscope/
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I am humbly honored to have worked with Hasty Words, and I’m giggling like a little girl because I really like the way it turned out. Thank you. 🙂
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Reblogged this on tot123itsme.
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Hasty always giving of yourself, spreading majestic awe-inspiring love without a thought….
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Excellent!! I was reading along, picturing things, and then BOOM the surprise (and absolutely perfect!) ending. I truly believe you have captured a vision, or perhaps “understanding of” is the phrase I seek, of God’s plan. LOVE this!
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Excellent!! I was reading along, picturing things, and then BOOM the surprise (and absolutely perfect!) ending. I truly believe you have captured a vision, or perhaps “understanding of” is the phrase I seek, of God’s plan. LOVE this!
Didn’t know I had to enter e-mail and such. I don’t wanna be “anonymous”!! 😀
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