Welcome Spreadincrazysmiles to the duet family. She just started diving into the world of poetic writing so head over to her blog and give her some poetic love.
Written by SpreadinCrazySmiles and HastyWords
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My mind could not focus, fuzzy
Bold boundaries became blurry
I was on my hands and knees
Mourning promises not kept
You’re surprised
Wondering why I’ve wept
Your eyes of confusion
Just a knowing dark facade
Don’t think I can’t see it
Although your fog is thick
It’s all a deceptive trick
Suffocating my heart
Chaining my mind at bay
Our worlds collided
Became one right away
We were inseparable, bound
Together forever you said
I was caught off guard, blind
By a few casual winks
And a come hither smile
I am sick to my stomach
As I realize your intentions
Reeling me in, an animal
You couldn’t wait to trap
Your words struck my soul
They sunk in like poison
My heart is no longer whole
What is it about you
That keeps me stuck here
Why can’t I loosen the chain
Is this price I have to pay
Do I deserve this pain
Like a masquerade ball
Your face changes day to day
The mask I loved once
Was taken off display
Now only sinister shadows
Hide inside your pupils
Watching my every move
Daring me to disobey
My heart was paralyzed
My mind however was not
I tried to break free
Against my hearts every beat
Like a mantra with a chorus
I’m infatuated with a monster
With a body and a face built
To drive any female crazy
I am addicted and obsessed
To the drama you’ve created
Your insanity is the drug I crave
So I am stuck with a beast
Flying high on his passion
Doled out in dime sized doses
Suffering emotive withdrawals
I live in a state of defeat
A state of romantic neurosis
lucky you, most folks are bored and hooked on TV, hooked on Love, is the dream of eternal life come through, great words
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Thank you for inviting me!!!
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Nice job. Welcome, I believe you will enjoy the family, both duet and wordpress. The encouragement here is outstanding and like none other
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Thank you, I’ve been here for about a month now and it’s awesome. I wanted to try poetry, I’ve got a couple poems in my archives but I haven’t really been into it like I am. Hastywords invited me to write with her and I jumped on it. She’s awesome at what she does!!! I was just..well.. a mess! 😀
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Well I couldn’t tell. She is great. We have done one together and it was a fun experience.
I’m newish as well. Have been writing awhile but hardcore for about a year. Enjoy the journey
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Great poem guys
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Reblogged this on From One Crazy Life To Another and commented:
A poem I wrote with Hastywords. She invites anyone to write poetry with her and she rocks at it! Go check her out!!!
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You lift me up…. and then drop me off a cliff…
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I try to keep making the comments more intense…
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Oh this was so awesome! The idea of romantic neurosis.. Love truly is aesthetic arrest.
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Reblogged this on georgeforfun.
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