Meet Johnny Ojanpera. My latest duet partner wrote the following piece with me and I have to say after he sent me the first stanza I felt I was a little bit in over my head. Please visit him and leave him some of your thoughts.
Written by Jonathan Ojanpera and HastyWords
If a whisper brought you here
A breath, your crimson aura, all I feel
If you’ll shift a little toward my side
You may find the depth of mine
Retract your defenses, no form to hide
If, one day, upon the wind you find
A song with your name entwined
If you’ll free yourself for a spell
The Zephyr will carry to you my hymn
The floating sentiments on which I dwell
Turn to face me; doll you’ve come
Sing me into your precious stare
As for me, I crafted your abode
Countenance lifted, stored tears
Time unhindered, claim me as home
Turn my vitality into ethereal visions
Draw me into your conscious fantasy
As for me, I wither without your touch
Spirit held unabridged and given flight
I am only held whole inside your clutch
That’s fantastic., The way have changed your style to match his. Brilliant. You were not over your head whatsoever. Well done.
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Reblogged this on tot123itsme.
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Another incredible meeting of the minds through the power of imaginations fueled by literary precision. Excellent.
Keep Inspiring
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I just nominated you for an award! Check it out on my blog
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The gift of your inventiveness in your gift of creating poetry is beyond breathtaking! I am in awe of your talent and your imagination! Absolutely EXCELLENT! I personally never made it past “Roses are red . . .” haha
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This is amazing. Both of you created this lovely tribute. Reminds me of Shakespeare – without the thou’s and dost’s…
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Nice… but that aura looks yellow to me…
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Beautiful collaboration – natural synergy.
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