This beautiful girl, PassionWriting, is so full of life and optimism I was surprised to see how well she pulled this one off. She sent me the first verse and I loved how she finished it!
Written by PassionWriting and HastyWords
The clouds of uncertainty
Cover me along
I look for one last ray of hope
That will prevent me from splitting apart
My heart stopped long ago
Leaving me cold, empty, sad
There feels like there is nothing left
And all the thoughts I have left are bad
I stare ahead at the empty road
I walk listlessly along
Chewing on the mistakes of my past
And wondering if i can be whole again
The memory’s haunt me relentlessly
I wonder how much of what I remember
Was any kind of real at all
What part of reality did I imagine
In a dilemma that is my own life
Torn amidst dreams and reality
I know not how long I can go
I slowly turn to rest my eyes in peace
I close my eyes and look for comfort
In the only place that calls to me
I find the dark accepts me unconditionally
And holds me in its black embrace
Finally, I am where I belong
Eternity calls out to me
The haunted memories of the broken past
Forgotten as I slowly kiss death












as I told u my first real work on tragedy…and all thanks goes to you:)
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This is really good – you keep all the fog out of the narrative and the power of the telling comes through really strongly.
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Thanks 🙂
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Yikes!! Get out of my head!! I completely relate to this.. with heartaches of my own:(
Lovely ladies!! Very very good! ~Jen
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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