Written by HastyWords 12/27/12
Sometimes I HATE my inner dialog!
Your
Words dissolve
Into pools
Of deception
Your
Smile rots
Leaving
Teeth riddled
With broken
Torn up flesh
Eyes hidden
Behind a mask
You are the
The liar that
Hides inside of me
Torturing me
With hope
With dreams
You tell me
I will never realize
Ah, but thankfully, you recognize this ne’er do well, which allows you to render him toothless and inept, fo you are the superhero HASTYGIRL!
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oh!!! wow!!! This poem hit us straight through our teeth. I love this one. Trusting people today is an issue we got to get to know people very well, in order for us to know if they are liars or honest people. Great job in this piece.
Happy New Years Hasty. 🙂 I’m back! 🙂
Say, Do you have Skype?
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I miss you too…I have a webcam now…I wanted to know if you had skype so that we can talk and say hello. 🙂
🙂
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Yes…That would be awesome. 🙂 How was your Christmas by the way?
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Pleasant…a little sad that my whole family wasn’t here to spend it with us. But, above all, it was okay. I did get gifts and a two tickets to see “Marilyn Manson” Live. 🙂
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Indeed. 🙂 This will be my second time seeing them live…but my girlfriend and I it will be our first concert together. 🙂
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Yes…they do indeed. 🙂 I’m looking foreword to this concert in 2 months. 🙂
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P.S my next poem will be posted on January 7th. Monday. I will come back with some mind blowing material. 🙂
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🙂
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This is the real thing. At last! The schmaltzy stuff drains sometimes here and there … this is more raw, direct…wonderful..
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I have one of those inside me… 😦
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I know what thats like. well done standing up to the harsh inner voice
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Exactly that
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