Troy Scott has been spending a lot of time “thinking about the implications and applications of shared perception enhancement”.  It would be so much easier to have compassion, or empathy, or even sympathy for someone if you could indeed see something from another person’s perspective.

I don’t think I have ever debuted a short fiction piece on my blog before so this is a wonderful change of pace. I hope you visit Troy’s facebook page, linked in his bio, to tell him what you thought of this piece.  Thank you Troy for sending me one of your stories for this month’s compassion piece.





Thia sat up sharply and waited a noticeable moment before she spoke.

“You’re still thinking like everything is a big pile of blocks. Look way past that and you’ll see the-”

Thia stopped and Alice saw her mom’s face light up. Thia held up Alice’s hand between them like an ancient valuable artifact, which, in reality, is exactly what it was.

“Here. It’s easier to just show you.”

Alice made big eyes, brimmed with anticipation. She simply loved when her mom did this! Alice still struggled to do it right herself, but her mom made it look so easy, that it seemed like she was just watching it happen on its own.

“Your hand seems solid because that’s an easy way for your brain to understand motion and contact.”

They high fived as she continued.

“But when we look closer, we can see what’s really happening.”

As Thia spoke, Alice’s hand was slowly growing.

Alice knew her hand wasn’t REALLY growing, that it was just a “shared perception enhancement” guided by her mother, but as her fingers wiggled through the ceiling like brown ghosts, it was still amazingly cool.

“Your hand still looks solid right now, so bigger we go.”

Alice watched as her hand grew bigger than the house. Her mom, the sofa and everything else faded from view as Alice’s enormous, now-translucent hand continued to grow and reveal muscle, bone and veins. Everything was throbbing and moving frantically. Alice tried to still her movements like her mom had taught her. She breathed deeply and slowly. She pretended she was a planet that was losing gravity and letting all of herself just drift gently away from her center.

Thia spoke softly as Alice’s hand grew past recognition.

“Lots further to go.”

Alice saw a vast ocean all around her. Beautiful faceless creatures were swimming. There were slow, solitary ones, frantic chases, mobs, and drifting debris.

Alice was verbally providing sound effects.


“Bloop. Bloop. Bloop.”


There’s a special trick that only the best moms know. They know how to make a noisy little girl quiet with the tiniest bit of effort.

Thia knew the trick.

She spoke in a slow, soft whisper.

“Now we will go much further. Ready?”

Whispered Alice.

There was a wave of light as everything all around exploded in size. Alice was briefly blinded by the intensity. Which was weird. They hadn’t actually been using their eyes since the room faded away.

And then Alice gasped at the vast ocean of stars, stretching infinitely in every direction.

“I’m the universe!”

“That’s right baby, you’re my universe. What do you see?”


“And what else?”

Alice felt confused.


“And what do we call the nothing between the stars?”


“Which are you more of, space or stars?”


The Alice Universe collapsed and faded from view to reveal two people sitting on a sofa, gazing into each other’s eyes over their clutched hands.

“Doesn’t anything really ever touch?”
Whispered Alice.

“Hardly ever.”
Whispered Thia.

There was silence.

“Are we touching?”
Whispered Alice.

“What do you think?”
Whispered Thia.

“Yes. But not really.”

Thia grinned.

“That’s just one of the reasons you are the smartest eight-year-old girl I know.”

Thia and Alice cuddled closely as the last rays of the day pointed out the window to the closest star.

Thia smelled her daughter’s soft hair.

Alice snuggled into her mom’s warmth.

And they both felt comfort, knowing that no matter how far apart they ever might be, they would always be this close.



IMG_7317Troy is a 47 year old Oklahoman, artist, and speciality act performer who also enjoys spending time with loved ones, meeting new people, learning new things, wasting time on the internet, and writing poetry and short fiction.

He has a habit of writing essays which, no matter how they begin, inevitably address the struggle of simultaneously attempting to expand, compassion, knowledge and social justice.

Despite these efforts, Troy still retains typically American levels of materialism, hypocrisy, ego, gluttony and distraction.






5 thoughts on “THE SPACES BETWEEN

  1. BEAUTIFUL! Ohhhhh I LOVE IT! It reminded me so much almost of the Wrinkle in Time books, and how wonderful and magical and SCIENCEY and real and true and mystical and INCREDIBLE everything is, if we take time to think about it closely.

    If we take time to notice.

    And on a cellular level, each one of us is a universe, and we might never touch, but we get close enough to hug, and that’s HUGE.

    Wow. I ADORE this 😀

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