I wrote this when I first started blogging. I guess relationships are something I have always over analyzed and today is no different. Words4jp made me think of this poem I wrote so long ago.
Our relationship wouldn’t last long
It was nearly over before it even began
I knew it even as I held out my hand
Your eyes were speaking volumes
Damaged they said, handle with care
Your words carefully guarded
Small hesitant snippets here and there
You need my help, nothing more
I had something you needed
I had something to give
Inevitably we will stand at the end
Saying thank you and you’re welcome
Thank you for making me feel important
Welcome, and thank you for supporting me
So on it goes with every one I meet
But I can’t help but think
The transaction isn’t complete
I think I gave away a valuable part of me
I held on to a valuable part of you
During this time you needed me
I needed you too
I gave you a part of my heart
In exchange for a part of yours
And now that we have moved on
I think about those pieces of me
Living on inside of you
It is now I realize after all this time
It is in all those pieces
Love becomes a reality
It’s with those pieces you remain connected to me
It’s because of those pieces
You will be a different you
I will be a different me
A better you, a better me
~Hasty 07/2012
stupend Hasty
marcello
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you are a lovely person. with a loving soul. and a loving heart. i admire this about you.
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i don’t believe your poetry has change in two years, now may think thats wrong, however that me the only one i know!
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that was awesomely happy and sad…
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I like that in the end, the hope is that we improve one another.
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We definitely lose and gain a few pieces from love. I really enjoyed this piece.
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Beautifully written!
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Thank you
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