I am so happy I found this blog and I really hope everyone decides to visit the magnificence behind this duet.

Written by G and HastyWords
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I stand an ice sculpture
frozen under star light;
numbness welcomed
under the blanket of night.
I call upon the sun
to save me from this eve;
clinging to this emptiness
of little reprieve.
I sat for an eternity
as the world grew old;
before the glow of daybreak
came to melt away the cold.
The sun began to rise,
a comfort from the night
giving hope for tomorrow
and a reason to fight.
I felt my heart thaw
as it began to beat;
the will to survive
brought me back to my feet.
One step at a time,
a little closer than before;
with one final gaze
at the life I had before.
“Hope springs eternal!!”
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Yay!! I’m so proud of us! 🙂
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You both did an amazing job. This is profoundly deep if you just sit back & let the words sink in.
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That’s a good one. Well done.
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Reblogged this on Keptmeprisoner.
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I like the poem G & Hasty I can see the structure how ties together possibly metaphor would be sure that, for me to learn place into my own poems now is a different story. I ain’t giving up…
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Reblogged this on Icanbeatit.
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This is a really great poem, guys! I am proud of you two.
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Now that was tenderly sweet and sweetly tender. Now go write a part in my scary story post.
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this is incredibly lovely.
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