So This Old Toad took one of my poems and made it better! It’s like a song…his added words are grey!
Written by ThisOldToad and HastyWords
So…I love you
And I love you
I say it a lot
Yes…Sweetie you do
Too much
Not at all
Like you might forget
Never, ever I bet
In one ear out the…
Anyway…I love you
Me too, I do love…
I’m crazy, you’re crazy
Both in different ways
Yes to the end of all our days
I hear a bunch how
You are amazing
Because I am difficult
Maybe
Flirty
Occasionally
Stubborn
Extremely
Emotional
Most passionately
Opinionated
You don’t sit there quietly
Talkative
I love that, most definitely
Aggressive
Never, never hardly ever
But hear me out
Because I love you
And I love you
And that’s enough right?
Yes darling to my delight
I am also
Loyal
Without a doubt
Honest
Incredibly
Silly
Laughingly
Forgiving
Indefinitely
Committed
Evidently
Protective
Courageously
And that’s good, I think
As I wink
Not one thing exists
In this entire world
Of loving bliss
That compares to the love
That excites
To the feeling of comfort
The feelings of joy
To the safety I feel
When I am wrapped
Lovingly as you must
Protected in the trust
I must, I must, don’t let go
Of your loving arms
And joyfulness
So forgive me if I am saddened
As I’m lost in a daze
By the unhappiness in your gaze
I somehow realize
Don’t blame me when I try
With questions to probe
In your minds eye
Ways I can help you find
This happiness you seek
Wishing we’ll always keep
Together we will find it
Maybe buried deep
And when we do
We’ll be two
I bet all the stars in the sky
Will laugh and cry
It has been waiting right there
Always for me
Idol and patient
Lovingly
Right inside of you
Please help me to
Get inside of you
The place where happiness is born
You’ll see
The place where happiness belongs
For you and me!
That is fantastic!! I love it
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YES!YES!YES!
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love is such a wonderful feeling.when receprocated,its a bliss.
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Reblogged this on georgeforfun and commented:
What a team, Bravo. Well done
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Nice… and spicey…
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Wonderful duet…
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I love it! Part of it sounds like conversations I have with myself, but when I’m in love, it’s how I feel about my other..
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