I am stealing the pic TwinDaddy had for this poem because I LOVE it! Hope you like the poem we wrote from the perspective of two young kiddo’s!
Written by TwinDaddy and HastyWords
When we were young
You thought I had cooties
You used to run
I used to chase
We both giggled
And I would pretend
Like I was going to lick your face
When we were young
We played kiss and tag
Afraid of your kiss, I ran
I believed you had cooties
But I didn’t care
Because secretly I wished
You would eventually catch me
When we were young
The other boys
Loved to tease me
You were the first
To pack a punch
And friends for life
We did become
When we were young
The other girls
Pointed and laughed
You were the only one
To play with me
Spend time with me
To show me you cared
When we were young
You moved away
My heart hurt
It felt very sad
That was the day
I understood
What it felt like to love
When we were young
I was taken away
From you, from us
From the good times
We shared together
That was the first time
I’d ever been broken-hearted
You two are a good duo!!
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Ha! Lemme get my head out of my ass and think on it! It’s been crazy busy here and I haven’t been writing at all 😦
Maybe I/we can work on something this weekend?
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Thank you, dearest Ginger.
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So cute. 🙂
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nice collaboration
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Thank you!
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That was wicked awesome…
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Don’t do them if you don’t like them. I will be able to tell.
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I am that good…
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I love the juxtaposition. Very sweet.
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I just love this piece!! Such a great idea to write in the mind of a child… so creative you two!! I heart both of you!! XoXo
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Love you 🙂
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Xo Love you too!! ((I didn’t see an email from you girl… not since your first one. I wrote & sent back to you late yesterday afternoon… )) FYI
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Ok I will look for my reply 🙂
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K..
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