I was contacted to do a duet with this beautiful girl. She sent me a poem and asked me to edit it and post but….it is way too beautiful to change a word. Please take time to visit her blog….you won’t regret it! Her words to me in her email are as follows and set up her poem! “I wrote this poem which is about a hesitant girl, not very confident about herself or what to do. Kind of a motivational poem to inspire people like her and to let them know others look forward to them.”

An unfinished hem,
A few loose threads
Of your brazen lemon attire
Fleet lightly as you pace
Simulating tiny glints of fire
Leave warmth behind
Of your summery aura
Against grassy ambiance sublime
You, a swaying chrysanthemum
Euphonic tinkling Lyra
Don’t carry along
Plumbean days of your past
Severe those cumbersome ties
Lethean vows, treacherous lies
Iterating nightmares, oblivion, vast
Surf, as if sky is the new sea
Like the astral ball of pyre
Leave petals of your citron shine
Melt this freezing zephyr
Enliven, Rekindle, Revive, Incite.
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You’re right…it’s great as a stand alone!
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wonderful!
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That’s awesome that you have such an integrity of a true poet that you honor the beauty of someone else’s words, without taking the opportunity to include your own. Well done, and it is a beautifully written poem. Thanks for sharing the email because of the relevance of her hesitancy.
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Incredible!!
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great poem Bohemian. Love the use of imagery!
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bang on..!!!
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Reblogged this on Nocturnal Drift…. and commented:
Thank you hastywords. This feels awesome 🙂
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