He doesn’t normally write poetry but I mercilessly pestered him until he relented. Be sure to check out his blog because he writes with an elegantly beautiful flow. Be sure to stock your fridge if you are going to read his Summer Heat series though because it is naughty….which just makes me hungry….and fat.
Written by TheRecliningGentlemen and Hastywords
I can’t tell if it is dark
Or if something has blinded me
But the air feels thick
Practically choking me
Dots of distant light
Try to become rays
Try to illuminate
But are extinguished
Cobwebs wrap silky threads
Of night around me
As I watch happiness
Flirt just out of grasp
The black blanket suffocates
Offers no comfort
Gives no security
Against internal enemies
Held captive by chemistry
Electrochemical messages
Get sidetracked , dis-guarded
Lost in neurological translation
I force my eyes to close,
The darkness now complete.
I pause, breathe, wait
For the clouds to clear
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This is a great song…..
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I can’t decide if it is about self inflicted darkness or a darkness that another has imposed on the narrator. It could even be a little of both. The wordplay is very creative and flows throughout the poem effectively. The last stanza is especially powerful and concludes a strong poem very well. Considering it is a collaboration is even more impressive. Thanks for sharing.
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Nice!!!:)
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