I got swept up
On a reverie Lost track of time Behind feelings As I drifted
Without a care
Through space Through time A whirlwind Sending me Into tailspins A wondrous ride A carefree world I’ve never known Gifted to me Inside the insanity Left behind In the aftershocks Lingering In the aftermath Of you
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i had always known, that you too would write beautiful poetry together!
Love from a MUSE!
O-YES, we are looking for a half a million hits in the new year!
So passionate and spontaneous! Brimming over with emotion! Whatever you’ve got, it could light up New York! Keep them coming and I’ll send you a plastic whistle. LOL! I think, seeing this, that when I write poetry, I’m too inclined to rhyme everything, so I miss out on a lot of the mellow drama. So I can’t let my feelers flow. I think next time I’ll write something that makes no sense to me what-so-ever, and perhaps that will do the trick. Great composition! Great learning experience for me!
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Sometimes writing feels like rhyming and sometimes it just feels like flowing and sometimes what makes no sense to us makes sense to someone else and vice versa.
Thanks for the tip! My Gosh! I get what you mean! That gives me a great start! You’re an Angel!
Love the flow of that one.
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Blindsided, without a care.
Beautiful words. And the ending…YOW! 😀 Really well done.
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