Another new duet partner. Thank you for writing with me Matticus
Also, I am using an image I found of an artist named Khaled al Saai, who is incredible and I hope you check out his art site by clicking on the picture.
Written by Matticus and HastyWords
The ‘sphere, smooth, invitingly gleams,
Word by word, clean, I loose my waltz,
Rise and fall, elegant, a dream,
But the story spins, discord, the music halts.
The atlas upon which I had always spun,
Stood silent inside these forgotten halls.
Upset tapestries billowed curses at the sun,
As shadows wrote blasphemy on my walls.
Steps falter, unknown, across the floor,
Balance shifts, lost, gracelessly flails,
The line breaks, shattered, spills out its moor,
The written dance, chaos, slips the rails.
Rusty tears free form into a manic dive,
Smearing stains, blurred arcs, finding rest;
A spilled ache of a hundred voices strive,
Inside inkblots transformed into art, expressed.
The soulful song, lilting, starts anew,
From single notes, haunting, to stringing chords,
The telling story, beauty, haltingly renews,
An elegant, hasty and royal, waltz of words.
Flawlessly the final rhymes find their lures
Reckless abandon, sprinting into heavy clouds
Choosing, sorting, and rearranging characters
Raining poetry, soaking an applauding crowd
The art matches the words that imply the music. Very nice.
Leslie
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Agreed, Hasty, you picked a wonderful piece of art to go with this poem!
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The emotion is effortless, I love this!
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I’m glad you liked it! 😀
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i like this piece of art, reason being it dreams of poetry….
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Very hard not to like something that dreams of poetry, right?
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yeah!
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Reblogged this on jensenempire and commented:
RAINING POETRY
Another new duet partner. Thank you for writing with me Matticus,
i would also like to thank you for writing with hasty, poetry in dreams….
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This is INCREDIBLE. You two should write together again. I love, love, LOVE this! The words dance with the poem. Stunning 😀
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Again?!?!
Well… Okay! 😀
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YAY! Do it! Do it! Do it! 😀
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Reblogged this on The Matticus Kingdom and commented:
The poetic dynamo, Hasty, was kind enough to write a duet with me. Head on over and check it out.
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Very nicely written… especially the third stanza… loved it…. hey… this is my blog… please take a look and tell me how it is… http://pratheekreddy68.wordpress.com/
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Well written, like it.
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*bows* Thanks, glad you liked it!
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BAM!
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Boom?
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ba da bing
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Magnificent! That is all.
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Thank you. That is just the beginning.
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Reblogged this on georgeforfun.
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Effortless piece and art calligraphy! 🙂
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You are excellent dance and poetry partners. Hope you collaborate again.
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A tango next time? Or, perhaps a cha-cha?
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Reblogged this on فيحان العتيبي.
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